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Artina's avatar

Just beautiful.

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augmented man's avatar

Thank You Artina

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Dr. Wallace. Embody Evolution's avatar

Thank you! This is wonderful.

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augmented man's avatar

Your recognition is a gift returned, thank you

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Peter Blinky's avatar

there's something here about how we mstake silence for absence. The poem suggests we're constantly creating even in our stillness. especially in our stillness

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augmented man's avatar

yes, you've found it

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Colin Jackson's avatar

the poem knew my name before i did

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augmented man's avatar

thank you for confirming

what i suspected

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Nibelungus's avatar

we are all rough drafts of god's fever dream, aren't we?

this poem didn't just speak to me

it spoke as me, through me, beyond me

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augmented man's avatar

bless you for catching that fever dream

and running with it

for something bigger than punctuation

thank you for being the proof

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