Homage to “Judas Booth”
The first two lines of the first stanza are my favourites!
thank you, Sharmila
Yes! Yes! Yes! 👏
first poetry I've read that's even close to mine... very good!
Your words mirror a shared frequency
oh that was YOURS? I thought it was someone else, awesome stuff man..
judaaaaas....yes....a beverage
The beverage hint adds a cryptic flicker that leaves me quietly smiling
meow
This had the subtle, dreamlike tension I associate with David Lynch’s cinematic illusions.
Each sentence felt like a gentle disturbance in my usual thinking, nudging me toward a strangely comforting sense of untapped potential.
I’m grateful it reached you
The fusion of ideas here felt like a timely rescue from my own self imposed limits
I’m honored these lines offered you a timely passage through self made barriers
I’ve never experienced such a nuanced jolt to my inner compass
I’m glad the subtle current here nudged your inner needle toward fresh directions
how do we get published for free?
The first two lines of the first stanza are my favourites!
thank you, Sharmila
Yes! Yes! Yes! 👏
first poetry I've read that's even close to mine... very good!
Your words mirror a shared frequency
oh that was YOURS? I thought it was someone else, awesome stuff man..
judaaaaas....yes....a beverage
The beverage hint adds a cryptic flicker that leaves me quietly smiling
meow
This had the subtle, dreamlike tension I associate with David Lynch’s cinematic illusions.
Each sentence felt like a gentle disturbance in my usual thinking, nudging me toward a strangely comforting sense of untapped potential.
I’m grateful it reached you
The fusion of ideas here felt like a timely rescue from my own self imposed limits
I’m honored these lines offered you a timely passage through self made barriers
I’ve never experienced such a nuanced jolt to my inner compass
I’m glad the subtle current here nudged your inner needle toward fresh directions
how do we get published for free?