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Kudos, I withheld a sudden breath with each line. I felt your pain.

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Dear Anna,

Your lines echo with tender, aching emotion, masterfully encapsulating the bittersweet dance of saying goodbye one last time.

Deeply moved.

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@Anna Casamento Arrigo,

Your words echo the quiet, yet profound spaces between presence and absence, leaving a haunting resonance of love's fleeting touch.

A tender, introspective piece.

Thank you

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deletedOct 31, 2023Liked by augmented man
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Anna,

Does seeing time as an endless succession of tomorrows help or hinder us from being fully present now?

Yet even should tomorrow not come to pass, your poem ensures these glimpses of life will not be forgotten.

Please keep writing.

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deletedOct 12, 2023Liked by augmented man
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Anna,

I am most grateful for your kind words and support. Your encouragement greatly motivates me to continue my endeavors.

Again, my deepest thanks for your backing.

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