Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem. Your lines "Love is life and comes from the Lord" and "Love has overcome..My downfall, deaf and dumb" resonate on many levels.
I imagine readers will find much to ponder here.
Again, thank you for your meaningful contribution. Wishing you all the best as your writing journey continues.
Freely Freed
Worthy of love, who can be?
Worthy of God, no eye can see.
This world commands, nothing is free-
You must earn reward, earn your keep!
Still, love is more than one could afford-
Love is life and comes from the Lord.
He decides and loves free-
I long for love, it is all I need.
Prevent I insult with efforts in vain-
To uselessly work, may we now refrain.
Accepting God's gift, soothing our pain!
None is equal nor above..
Everlasting love;
It is grace, nothing less-
Saving us with love's best-
Can't explain, I confess
Could never pass love's test-
Still I hold what has saved,
From that which I've strayed..
Love has overcome..
My downfall, deaf and dumb.
Love is all I need;
Freely I am freed!
Danielle Hajny
9/24/2023
Dear Danielle,
Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem. Your lines "Love is life and comes from the Lord" and "Love has overcome..My downfall, deaf and dumb" resonate on many levels.
I imagine readers will find much to ponder here.
Again, thank you for your meaningful contribution. Wishing you all the best as your writing journey continues.