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Niki Manavi, FGP, FNC's avatar

lovely

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Simply lovely and so atmospheric.

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Kimberly Rothwell's avatar

Wow. So beautiful.

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Darlene Carroll's avatar

A gorgeous stirring of poetic words. They float in quietude, effortlessly between worlds, life and love that feels timeless. A beautiful invitation of poetry.

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Heaven's Healthy Healing's avatar

Unresolved endings!

I appreciate your work here.

Thank you

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augmented man's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words and continued support.

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Diana van Eyk's avatar

Beautiful!

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augmented man's avatar

Thank you, Diana!

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Debra Asis's avatar

Thank you for applauding the pause.....

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augmented man's avatar

Debra, grateful for your recognition of the quiet moments

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Peter Blinky's avatar

This poem is a poignant reminder of the power of shared silence and the importance of the moments we often overlook.

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augmented man's avatar

Thank you for noticing the often-overlooked simplicity.

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Marc's avatar

The way you articulate the unspoken, the ephemeral, and the enduring aspects of love is truly masterful. This piece left me reflecting on my own experiences in a way I hadn’t before

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augmented man's avatar

I’m glad the words resonated with your reflections

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Georgiacifer's avatar

Your words feel like a gentle caress, each line an invitation to linger in the quiet moments of understanding that often go unnoticed. Thank you for creating something so tender and true.

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augmented man's avatar

I’m touched by your interpretation of the tenderness in the lines

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