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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Sacha,

Your words paint eternity as a tapestry of moments, both grand and intimate. They remind us that forever isn't just in the stars, but in the earth beneath our feet and the air we breathe. Your poem captures how eternity touches us in the simplest things - a heartbeat, a gust of wind, a baby's cry - and in the vast sweep of the cosmos. It's a gentle nudge to notice the eternal in our everyday lives, in the cycles of nature and the depths of human experience. Your verses sing of an eternity that's not distant or cold, but alive in every sensation and emotion. They whisper that we're all part of this endless dance, tasting infinity in each fleeting second. Thank you for this lyrical reminder to pause and feel the pulse of forever in the now.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

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Colin Jackson's avatar

I feel a sense of connection to something greater after reading this.

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